The five parts
1 Why them One line showing you chose this person for a reason.
2 Who you are One line: your role and organisation.
3 The value What is in it for them, with one piece of proof.
4 One ask Small and specific: a 15-minute call, a yes or no.
5 An easy out Permission to say no makes a yes more likely.
How much to personalise
The first line decides whether the rest is read. Each step up takes a few more minutes of research and is far more likely to get a reply.
Generic “I hope this email finds you well.”
Company “I see [Company] works with logistics firms.”
Recent news “Congratulations on opening the Leeds warehouse in March.”
Their own words “Your post on pick rates made me rethink how we train new staff.”
Templates by audience
Subject: Mis-picks at [Company]
Hi [Name],I saw [Company] opened a second warehouse in [city] this spring. Congratulations. Growing sites often see pick errors rise during the first few months.We help 3PLs cut mis-picks with a simple scanning check; [similar client] reduced theirs by [result] in [time].Would a 15-minute call next week be useful? If not, no problem at all.Best,[Your name]
59 words Opens with their newsShows you did research and gives a reason for writing now.Proof from a similar clientOne specific result beats a list of features.Low-pressure ask15 minutes, with an easy out.
Cold email templates for sales → Following up a cold email
Most replies to cold emails come after a follow-up, not the first message. Space them out, add something new each time, and stop after three. More in cold outreach templates that win replies.
| When | What it adds | |
|---|---|---|
| First email | Day 1 | Why them, the value, one small ask |
| Follow-up 1 | Day 4 to 5 | One line, in the same thread: “Did this reach you?” |
| Follow-up 2 | Day 10 to 12 | Something useful: an article, a figure, a short idea |
| Final note | Day 20 | A polite close that leaves the door open |
The final note
The last email in a sequence often gets the most replies, because it is easy to answer and asks for nothing. Keep it to two or three lines.
“Hi Laura, I won’t keep filling your inbox. If partner content becomes a priority later in the year, I’d be glad to pick this up. Best, Sam”
Subject line formulas
Short, lower-key and specific. A cold subject line should look like a normal work email, not an advert.
| Formula | Example |
|---|---|
| Question + their topic | Question about your pick-rate post |
| Mutual connection | Sam Lee suggested I get in touch |
| Their goal | Cutting onboarding time at Northwind |
| Specific idea | Idea for your spring webinar series |
| Their event or news | Your LogiCon talk on robotics |
| Role + credential | Product Manager role, 6 years in B2B SaaS |
When they ask for your salary expectations
A common reply after outreach to a recruiter or hiring manager. Give a researched range, tie it to the role, and leave room to discuss the full package.
Giving a range Thank you for asking. Based on the responsibilities and my research into similar roles, I’m looking for a base salary in the range of [£X to £Y]. I’m open to discussing the full package, including [benefits that matter to you].
Asking for their range first Thanks for the question. I’d like to understand the role’s scope a little more before naming a figure. Could you share the budgeted range? I’m confident we can find a fair number if the fit is right.
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