Daniel Osei
One letter, three candidates
The four-paragraph structure holds for everyone. What changes is the evidence in paragraph two. Choose a candidate to see the same job applied for from three starting points.
Daniel Osei
Five ways to open
The first sentence decides whether the reader keeps going. Each opener below names the role and gives a reason to read on; choose the one that matches your strongest card.
| Opener | Example | Best when |
|---|---|---|
| The headline | “In three years at Fresh Pantry I’ve run campaigns for six product launches.” | You have directly relevant experience. |
| The referral | “Sara Ahmed in your design team suggested I apply for this role.” | Someone at the company knows you. |
| The result | “Last year my campaign sold out a product’s first run in four weeks.” | One achievement is unusually strong. |
| The customer | “I’ve bought Brightwell oat bars every week since university.” | You genuinely know their product. |
| The change | “After six years teaching English, I’m bringing my writing skills to marketing.” | You are moving between fields. |
The achievement formula
Paragraph two persuades through evidence. Build each achievement from three parts: an action verb, the result it produced, and a number that shows scale. Pick a field to see the formula filled in.
Matching the job advert
Before you write, mark the three requirements the advert repeats or puts first. Your second paragraph should give one piece of evidence for each, in the same order.
| The advert asks for | Your evidence |
|---|---|
| Campaign planning | Planned six product launches in three years at Fresh Pantry |
| Working with data | Ran the oat-milk campaign that reached 1.2 million people and sold out in four weeks |
| Clear writing | Rebuilt the email newsletter, lifting open rates from 18% to 31% |
Use the advert’s own words where they are true for you. Many employers scan for them first.
Closing when you are changing careers
If you are moving into a new field, the closing paragraph is where you connect your past work to the new role in one line, so the reader ends on why you fit, not on what you lack. More examples are in cover letters for a career change.
Before you send
- Addressed to a named person, spelled correctly
- The company name is right everywhere
- The job title matches the advert exactly
- Saved as a PDF named with your full name
- Read aloud once, start to finish
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