Transitions by job
Each group runs from everyday to formal. Words marked formal suit reports, academic writing and official letters.
How to punctuate a transition
The punctuation depends on where the transition sits and whether it joins two full sentences.
Transitions at work in one paragraph
A paragraph from a project update. Each highlighted word tells the reader what the next sentence will do.
First, we moved all customer queries into one shared inbox. As a result, response times fell from two days to six hours. In addition, fewer queries were lost between teams. However, the inbox became crowded at busy times. Therefore, we now propose adding automatic tagging by topic.
Formal and everyday equivalents
The same link in two registers. Use the left column in essays and reports, the right column in emails and conversation.
Linking paragraphs, not just sentences
Between paragraphs, a single word is often too small. These phrases recap the last paragraph and point to the next in one move.
Using fewer, better transitions
A transition is only useful when the link between two sentences is not already obvious. Writers new to formal English often start every sentence with one, which makes the text slower, not clearer. Cut any transition the reader would add in their head anyway.
The rewrite keeps one link, the recommendation, and turns the three “and also” transitions into a list.
Pairs that are easy to mix up
| although / despite | “Although” is followed by a full clause with a verb; “despite” is followed by a noun or an -ing form. | Although the train was late, we arrived. / Despite the delay, we arrived. |
| whereas / while | Both contrast two facts. “While” can also mean “during the time that”, so use “whereas” when there could be confusion. | London grew 4%, whereas Leeds grew 9%. |
| Pair | Difference | Example |
|---|---|---|
| besides / beside | “Besides” means “in addition”; “beside” means “next to”. | Besides the cost, there is the time. |
| in contrast / on the contrary | “In contrast” compares two things; “on the contrary” rejects what was just said. | Sales fell in May. In contrast, June was strong. |
For the academic set, with register notes, see transition words for academic writing.
Practise in three steps
- 1HighlightMark every transition in your last report or essay.
- 2Name the jobWrite next to each one what it does: add, contrast, cause, example, order.
- 3Cut or swapDelete any the reader would not miss; swap repeats for a different word with the same job.
Guides on transition words
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